Class Feedback

once we had a rough cut of our opening sequence as a class we all watched each others and gave feedback for what we thought of it. We found that our opening sequence had things that could be improved to make better for example, in some shots the diegetic sound is interrupted by laughing and not all shots flowed together right. We fixed this by filming pick ups. Another problem with our opening sequence was that the running scene wasn't believable, it looked as if the main character was running with the bullies rather than being chased, to fix this we also needed to re film to make it believable.  i feel that doing this and giving each other feedback was really needed and helpful as we where able to see and notice things we might  not have noticed just ourselves. 

Audience Research

We briefed our primary audience of teenage boys about our ideas for our film. Overall they really liked our idea, however they thought that the idea was quite unrealistic and unsure if it would actually be believable. We also found out that our target audience preference of film genre is mostly comedy and action, we were satisfied by that result as our film is an action film. Most of our audience said that they would go to watch our film in the cinema This audience research has been very helpful for us as it has made us understand our target audience more. Our secondary target audience is women aged 14- 30.

Genre Research

Genre Research- Action and Superhero Films

Characters-
Main Hero

• Sometimes mythical creatures
• Big sense of morality and courage
• Do what is good and right 
• Sacrifice themselves for humanity 
• Often behind disguises, are shy and geeky

Villain

• The audience love to hate and hate to love 
• Selfish and want power 
• Either the first scene consists of the Villain or the Villain comes later in the film this depends on how familar the audience are with the film and whether it is a sequel

Lover Of Hero

• Helpless and naive
• Often introduced later in the film

Typical scenes of genre-

• Superhero films would either start with the bad guy or start with showing us how the superhero got his powers.
• Action films always include a chase scene

Typical Iconography- 

• Weapons
• Superhero suits

Typical Themes-

• Good vs Evil 
• Immorality 
• Morality 
• Superhuman 

Preliminary Sequence

I thought that the preliminary sequence was overall quite successful, however I do believe that there was room for improvement in many different aspects of it. Firstly the match on action, at one point character A (in the red jumper) was on one side of the stairs and then jumped to the other, this could have been improved by doing a few pickups. Another thing that I believe stopped it from being even better was the range of shots that we used, I thought that we could have gotten much more shots to really signify the characters authority in the sequence. Another thing would be to improve the shot reverse shot, once we had made the sequence we realised when filming the conversation between character A and B it could have been improved by filming character B's parts from characters A's other shoulder. Also the camera work in some shots you can hear the clicks to the tripod being moved as the camera is panning on the main character.

credit title sequence research

In this opening sequence the credits are randomly placed on the framing. The colour is white this makes the names stand out against the black. The font is written in capital letters to make it readable to the audience and accessible to read while watching the different shots.  The frames and change of shots are fast and sharp, it shows the genre idea of action. It keeps the audience's attention. the title is bold and in capital letters to give audience title knowledge.

Order of credits:

1. Production company
2. Director
3. Actors
4. Further people who help with production
5. Castings
6. Costume Designer
7. Co producers
8. Sound design
9. Music
10. Editors
11. Production Designer
12. Director of photography
13. Executive producers
14. Producers
15. Book it is based on (book credits)
16. Screenplay
17. Director

order of credits in film industry

1. Distribution Company
2. Name of production company
3. Director
4. Producer
5. List of actors
6. Movie title 
7. Editor
8. Costume designer